Shattered

Subject: Shattered Thu Mar 20, 2014 6:02 pm

Prologue

What is friendship? What’s its purpose? It's base point in this world? Truthfully I don’t understand it at all… maybe because I only felt it once. I never understood it and tried to. I always seem to ask this question over and over in my head. Wondering why I’m so obsessed into finding it out. Defining it. It’s just one question that has many answers to it. I mean many think of it as a bond between many or someone you watch out for, a partner you could say. Well I only had one and trust me I felt alive… but life never stays’s the same…

Drowning- Chapter 1

Air. I need that. Without it I will die. I lost myself ever since the death of father, Kotano. First my little sister Akemi then mother. I don’t understand what I did for these deaths to happen. I found myself being blown around in a summer blizzard; it just all of a sudden came. I found ice under my paws, not having enough time to take it in. Snap. Crack. Pop. Suffocating as water stuffed my ears, nose, and stung my eyes. I never learned how to swim so I may as well stop struggling. Telling myself I’m ready. I guess I wasn’t because next thing I awake coughing up water a spit as my body attempted to clear the water from my lungs. I swear I was gone since I awoke with berries and sand a stream softly and peacefully flowing by. If it wasn’t for the slight and confusion flash back of a shadow carrying me out, a monster? No looked almost like me but smaller and knew how to swim. Getting up did I go and sniff the strange food before me. Finding my stomach full from the swallowed water did I move away. I sat at the beach until a few hours before nightfall, bored from waiting around. I walked around, trying to find a way out of the place. I didn’t make it far since the star’s came out to shine bright as possible.

Walking back to my makeshift camp smell a strange scent. Wolf. A snarl arose from my vocals as I plundered my way back to home. No it’s not home. Never will I find a place and call it “home”. Anyways I jumped the wolf. “Who are you and why are you here?!” A soft and elegant reply came, shocked at its unspoken harshness. “Get off! What does a lady gotta do to keep brutes off her? Saved your life too.” I removed myself from the lassie as I gawked awkwardly at her, “err.. Sorry… Miss.”
“Well... apology accepted. How are you feeling? Pain in your head or catch of breath?” She asked politely totally passing a large male pinned her. “Me? How am I feeling?” I reask the question still surprised to find she cared about my health. She nodded her rusty white head. “Fine I guess… I feel like my head is exploding but otherwise I’m fine.”

“Good. I brought you some tender fish, it’s quite tasty though it sounds fishy. Here,” She nudged the scaly body of the water creature, “thanks but I don’t eat fish…” I woof pushing it away, “Have you tried it?” She asked,

“No?”

“Then how do you know if you don’t like it if you never tried it?” For some reason a smirked at this, such a big pest yet I felt at ease around her. “What’s your name? I’m Anaku,” I question as I try the fish; she was right about it tasting good. Not much meat but it was alright after half drowning. She gave her name. Sharon… it was nice to know my savor’s name. A name I can at least treasure...

Okay I personaly think this is terrible... 0.0 xD But just so you guys and gals can get a better understanding of the awkward and wonderful Anaku! I would love to have your opinions so I don't undermine myself... cause I hate typing stupid things on the internet... Shocked

But I may write more if 1 I feel like it and 2 if you all at least like it. Anyways I really hoped you enjoyed it!

Subject: Re: Shattered Thu Mar 20, 2014 6:19 pm

I like it. c: Sounds interesting to me.

Subject: Re: Shattered Sun Mar 23, 2014 10:47 am

Nice wording!! c: I loved how the words just flowed perfectly. Keep it up!! Would love to hear more. This story is really interesting. It's good for other people to see it from their prospective and not just yours. I think this is great, by far I mean. :3 Please... Just do more. We would all love to hear what happens next. Trust me, this is NOT stupid at all. This is like... Seeing it all happen inside of your head. I could literally see in my head how things were working and how they were turning out. :) Awesome work!!

Subject: Re: Shattered Sun Mar 23, 2014 11:06 am

Aww Thanks wishy! Im glad you both find it interesting!

Subject: Re: Shattered Sun Mar 23, 2014 1:43 pm

Its pretty good, post more please xD